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Review:Ydnas Odell says:
First class all the way! This is one of the best one-shots I have read. Vey well done, Luna and Lupin are pprtrayed perefctly. This is so sad.

I like this so much that I have a lot of questions about the story

I was confused about what happened at the battle. Id Voldemort cast some sort of spell causing people to disapear as soon as they appeared how did Luna, Nevile and Lupn get there in the first place.

I get that Luna and Neville had to leave because they were both to injured too fight one. Maybe Harry ordered them to leave? But why did Lupin retreat? If he is dying and knows it, what is the point of retreating? How could he leave James and Lily's son to die alone under any circumstances?
It tends to make him out to be a coward in some ways, especially if he left Harry in the state he says he did. Is this the real reason he won't tell Luna what he did, because Luna would think badly of him?

Was Voldemorts spell just preventing reinforcements and the good guys were just too outnumbered?

Again what a great story this is. A ten! Added to my favorites.

Ydnas Odell AKA DA Jones

Author's Response: hey! sorry if that bit was confusing; voldemort pretty much lured harry, the order and some of the DA to some battleground. only a few seconds after arriving, everyone except harry was suddenly apparated away; not by themselves. basically they just disappeared because of a charm voldemort had set, and then harry was left alone. but while they were apparating, luna and remus both realized that they were apparating and thought of their destination: the shrieking shack. and that's where they ended up.

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