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Review:Siofra says:
The depth behind the story is great! You have to think about it for a while to fully be able to understand the full emotion behind it. Few people can write very powerfully without it sounding awkward or unlikely.

It would have been nice if the reader was given more details about what had been going on at the battle and more of Luna’s feelings in the beginning while sitting at the table. However, besides adding more details throughout the story and maybe being just a little more descriptive, the story was amazing.

The feeling behind the story was fantastic! You were able to show their emotions without just saying it straight out. I really is one of your great strong points in your writing and you should make sure to incorporate it into all of your writing!

Author's Response: more detail? i'll look in to that! thanks for pointing it out :) i'm glad you liked it.

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