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Review:BlackPheonix138 says:
Cute one shot. Warmed me up inside. It ends well not loose ends. In one shots I don't like it when it makes the reader want more or think there is going to be another chapter because that means to me that the story didn't end right. that there is a loose end or two that need to be tied up later which is why the reader expects more.

You portrayed Draco very well i can deffinately see him acting like that, treating Pansy like that...Arogant.

I like the Ivy it represents certain morals of the story. Seamus breaks her away from the ivy and what it represents. I won't go on about it here because that would give it away. So I'll just stick with I liked the Ivy.

Better than most stories a liitle deeper than others which I think short stories need.

The only thing I have to sugest is Seamus's Irish accent. you show it in the type in one part but otherwise I can't quite hear it as I read. There arn't many lines for seamus to say and i think it would add even more to this wonderful story.
9 out of 10 exelent!

Author's Response: hmm, i hadn't thought about typing him with an irish accent. that's an interesting point, maybe i should look in to that! i did say "me mum" instead of "my mum," haha, but i guess that didn't suffice. ;) that's cool, thanks for pointing it out. i'm glad you understood the whole ivy thing--makes me feel like i've accomplished something. thanks for the lovely review!

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