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Review:Ollie says:
r/r-ing cause snitchsista loves this one and cause it sounds pretty interesting! man, draco's such a voldemort wannabe, didnt voldemort even say that line? and how can he kick harry in the head? must have very long legs....=) (what is harry doing under his leadership anyway, i have to read on to know what is going on) ok! i was wrong, he hasn't recruited people like deatheaters and all that. gosh, you just made me think that mafloy was voldemort and harry was his deatheater... you're good. and im confused slightly. lol, nah im right. wow this is pretty grim but oh so powerful. malfoy is a coward, he doesnt play fiar, voldemort at least gave harry bck his wand but malfoy faced ron without a wand while he killed him with his. (does that make sense?) and i just love your descriptions, so powerful and so describing that im totally cringing with all this blood and awfulness in that one room. it is now a stained room and a tainted one, should be burned to the ground for all the terrible things that have happened there. things wont be the same now between harry and hermione now that they've lived with that. they're scarred, and the scar is a worse curse than the one on harry's forehead. this story is so fresh and raw. (i nearly typed flesh) its so dramatic and intense. its so great, and snithsista's right; it does need more reviews, so here's mine (hopefully long one) and great story dracana! xoxo ollie

Author's Response: Lol, yeah, Draco wants to be in control. Snitchsista bloody should like this one cos I wrote it for her and no else seems to like it much!!

Yeah, I thought about that - how the hell is he meant to kick Harry in the head? But hey, it was better than punching, and would hurt more, so I was like what the hell, let him do it, it'll be fun . . . Let's just say he has long legs!!

Lol, Scarhead would NEVER submit to Draco's will, and Draco wouldn't want him. I didn't even think about that, so thanks for pointing it out.

Facing Ron without a wand just made it funny. Ron's a useless bastard and deserved to die defenceless. Besides, Draco's cunning, he's a Slytherin after all.

Thanks so much for reviewing Ollie and all your depth in analysis. I;m really grateful!! xx

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