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Review:brad says:
Hey, this is lovely. Nice and slow, no silly sitcom-like disavowal of their feelings or accidents that leave them in a state of ignorance, just (timid) acceptance of what they have and could be, and then a very touching and moving conclusion - "kissing and touching softly". Sometimes I get tired of the multitude of stories out there which have some nice emotion and love in the first half but then devolve into physical sex/smut for the remainder. And you had me worried on that 'take me' utterance of Hermione's!

That 'not wanting to lose you as a friend' line is a powerful plot angle, serving double-duty, both in highlighting how strong their existing relationship already is, plus it places additional emotional involvement/drama on their having the courage to move forward.

Found out about this story via a recommendation of LJ user tome_raider. Thank you for the story!

Author's Response: Wow, that's...that's really great that you felt that way. Coming from Pam I'd be worried it wasn't smutty enough. :) J/K

It's funny to me. The men who have read this have been the ones happy that they didn't go 'all the way'. I would have assumed it would be the other way around. :)

But I was in a sweet mood. I never intended them to fall into bed, not even when Hermione murmured that line. I'm really glad you liked this! And I have to go thank Pam yet again for her support! :) Thanks again for the review!

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