Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:isteppedonsnape001 [NSI] says:
Hello! On the whole, this story was well-written, except for some grammar mistakes. It shows how and why Draco became a Death Eater, but I dont think it really ties in with what is written in the books. Also, does it mean that Draco became a Death Eater to avenge his mother? I dont think your chapter really supports that reason. Maybe you could put more of his thoughts about his mother, and put more things that could evoke the necessary emotions. Anyhoo, nice fic! :) 8/10!
-jadelynn

Author's Response: Thanks for answering my plea for review. This was my first fanfic, and I am planning a rewrite. I know a lil more now then I did when I wrote this. Thank you. I will take your comments seriously as I rewrite. you're awesome for reviewing so quick. Thanks.

Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 358
Submit Report: