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Review:Adelaide Merrefield says:
I don't know why, my penname is already there for reviews for other stories, but for some reason, even though I am logged in, I have to type in my name for your story.

Anyway, let's get to the point. Beautifully done. So many of the lines in this story were so hauntingly beautiful:

She didn’t know why she did it. The kiss was as dead as he.

“Bartleby, I hope you don’t mind let him being here, just for a while,” she said quietly as if talking to an old friend.

This is going to be quite a short review, in comparison to my other ones, and I swear to God I am being critical, but honestly, there's nothing to criticize. The description is superb, there are no errors...10/10. Also, this is going into my favorites (the 6th story, actually). Excellent job.

Author's Response: that's fine, it was a great review. thanks so much!

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