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Review:"They seek him here!" says:
I love the chocolate obsession that you've given Ginny. Thing is, for some of us women it's not far from the truth. LOL. The only thing I didn't agree with is that Draco didn't seem to have a lot of provication to kiss Ginny. You had Draco explain after the kiss but it would have been even better if you had made the tension he was feeling, at having her flirt with him, more obvious. Also I just can't picture Draco shorter than Ginny. Well I'm off to read your sequel-thanks!

Author's Response: I just can't picture Draco shorter than Ginny.

For some reason, a lot of people have trouble with that. Why? One of my best friends, who is a girl, has been six feet tall since she was ten. Oh well.


I love the chocolate obsession that you've given Ginny. Thing is, for some of us women it's not far from the truth. LOL.

*raises hand* My name is Jessica and I am a chocoholic. My friend Mstar is my enabler. She made me super chocolatey brownies for my birthday. Yum.

You had Draco explain after the kiss but it would have been even better if you had made the tension he was feeling, at having her flirt with him, more obvious.

Yes, well, the story is kind of from Ginny's point of view. She didn't pick up on the tension until it was too late. She was a bit distracted by chocolate *winks*.

Have fun with the sequel!

Thanks for you review!




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