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Review:almost_witch says:
Ahhh!!! Wonderful! I haven't ever read a Luna fic before, and may I say that you really kept her in story! Such as her naming the Shreiking Shack, *laughs* that's such a Luna thing.

Also I LOVED these lines, - Snowflakes blew into Luna’s tangled hair and pale lashes as she crawled from her chair. Her knees touched the cold, dusty floor and she watched the willowy man. For a moment Luna forgot that the scent of death was still on her."

I read it, and re-read it, and re-read it, I don't know but I really loved it so much! *smiles* well done :)

Also a thumbs up for writting this about Harry's eyes -
'Green like the color of decay; like death. The color of the Dark Mark. Or the color of peace,'
I haven't before seen someone write something like that about his eyes, where did you get such an idea?

Perfect length, perfect in-character, over-all a perfect story I can't find one thing wrong, you also ended it brilliantly, I like how you didn't drag it on too much so well done with that.

Also may I ask, what challenge was this story? i love challenges. :)

Well done and thank you,

almost_witch

Author's Response: the challenge was that the fic had to start of fwith "beneath the table was a half-conscious man," or something like that, but a few months after i uploaded it i tweaked it a bit. :| i'm really, really glad that you liked it so much, thank you for such a lovely review!

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