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Review:Arithmancy_wiz says:
Best part of the story—Voldemort’s line "Celebrate..." the Dark Lord cried. "Another has come to serve me." I love that.

I really enjoyed your portrayal of Draco here. He was well done. You hit on something that always stands out for me with him— his strange mix of fear and pride. It’s a weird character trait, but (sorry to be a bit over dramatic here) but a core part of who he is. Regardless, well done with him.

I was a bit confused though, trying to figure out how/where this fits into the HP universe, with Narcissa dead but Dumbledore alive…In the end, I am guessing it doesn’t really fit in, which is fine. I am all up for non-cannon pieces, but it was difficult not knowing. Hope that makes sense.

Overall a well done piece. A bit of general advice, if I may be so bold… Don’t rush. Take your time to paint pictures and set moods. It doesn’t all have to be about physical description, but a few well placed words can set an entire scene.


Author's Response: Albus the portrait? LOL. Trying to keep the mystery in it. This falls somewhere in my "Summer" story about Draco. It was my first fic, so I'm still in the process of hammering out my faults. Thanks for the review =) and reading.

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