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Review:Lilyflower22 says:
Oh that was beautiful. I really missed your writing, you know that?

The only problem is the one sentence, "Don’t you dare deciding over my life!".
It doesn't really make sense. The words are all there, as is the idea, but the order and the particular choice of words is not quite right.

Maybe the sentence should be something along the lines of, "Don't you dare take over my life!", or "Don't you dare decide my life!".
Those make a bit more sense.
Overall, I really liked it, however. Good job, once again!

Author's Response: Oooh, you picked the only sentence I really had a problem with! I thought that it didn't make much sense (I was not certain, though), but I was very eager to post the chapter as quick as possible. Thank you for your suggestions. I'm pretty sure I'll edit it. I'm so grateful for your reviews! :)

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