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Review:PadfootandProngs91 says:
Juls,

I started to read this...and the first thing I was going to ask was why in the world would Draco still join if Death Eaters killed his mother? Quite heartless.

I suppose you already answered that question at the end, huh?

I really like this, the way Draco was doubting his loyality to Voldemort (and Mr. Dumbledore, indirectly of course).

Two things to point out. I'm pretty sure the Dark Mark is put on the left forearm, not the right.

And it would've been fantastic to know why exactly Draco was so hateful towards his father. Was it him who killed Narcissa? If you ever add on to this, I'd take that into account.

The only true thing I have to chide would be the use of all caps. They can make a story seem more stupid comic rather than serious drama.

-PadfootandProngs91
9/10

Author's Response: You discovered my secret!! I really am more of a comic writer then a serious writer. After I posted the story, I found out about the right arm thing not left. I will prob fix that... soon.
And, yes my implied Narcissa killer is Lucius. Hopefully I'll be able to pull it all the answers out in the story "fifteenth summer". This is my first fanfic, so I'm grateful for honest opinion. Thanks for reviewing =)


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