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Review:singing says:
I know you're probably sick of me telling you what parts I laughed at the most, but I was hysterical when I read this: “Well, he’s basically been going around like a manly man, acting all solemn and pretending he doesn’t have feelings. Which for James means he’s swimming blindly in the depths of despair, falling down a slippery path of dejection, consumed by the mis—“

“Shut up, Sirius. I get it, he’s upset.” Haha too great. I loved it--the only reason I'm not giving you a 10/10 is because I think the whole Snape scene was a little too rushed. Otherwise though...wonderful!

Author's Response: I'm definitely not sick of hearing what you thought was funny, it's encouraging! About the Snape scene, I read over it many times to edit it, and I guess when you read to edit, you don't get the same experience that readers get while reading, because they do more of a 'gather-information-and-go-on' read, rather than 'do these words work together?' which makes everything seem longer, I guess. But I'll keep in mind your review when I edit from now on, so you won't have to deal with rushed scenes. Thanks so much for the review, especially for the crits, they really help!

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