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Review:Talia Brazil says:
So much action! You did very good describing the Aurors battling the Death Eaters, but I just feel like there is so much happening so fast! There is barely any dialogue between the characters in between events. The story is so short and so much is happening that I feel the whole thing is a bit rushed. Your writing is so good, I would just love to see more in between the different sequences!

I can't wait for the next! Good job!

Author's Response: hello again! yeah, it's definitely rushed, but this really was supposed to be a one-shot and i got kind of into it, haha. then i told myself only four chapters, and, well, that didn't happen either. ;) i completely agree that it would seem rushed, though, and i respect your opinion on that! maybe i should make an author's note or something. thanks again times a hundred for such great reviews! i really appreciate it! :D

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