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Review:Talia Brazil says:
Still a very good story and a very interesting character. I want to learn more about Moth.

My only critique is that the relationship between Harry and Moth is becoming a bit...unbelieveable. Even though Harry himself doesn't know why he is drawn to Moth, it is hard for me as a reader to understand as well, which is turning me off slightly to their partnership. Even though her parents were killed by Death Eaters and she is suffering like Harry has, she still feels no different than another character who has been affecting by Voldemort. I just don't feel that she is different enough to matter to Harry. I am battling with this because I know that is your intention, but there just seems to be not enough reason for it. But perhaps your future chapters will soothe me and I will understand ^_^

Author's Response: haha, i hope so! i think it was easy for me to write harry and moth because sometimes she reminds me of luna, and i think luna and harry would be a good pairing (don't shoot!). but i understand what you're saying. :)

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