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Review:Talia Brazil says:
An interesting beginning with a very interesting OC. She is mysterious and I am eager to learn more about her as you have not revealed too much about her just yet, which I think is a very good writing decision. Too often do authors reveal everything about their characters in the first chapter of a story. I think that you work really well with descriptions and really getting certain images into a reader's mind. Your choice of words is very good and not repetitive.

You have some grammatical and sentence structure errors here in there, especially in your use of commas. I do not quite yet understand the use of the italics. Is it to denote past events or just interactions between Moth and Harry?

A good start! I will definitely read the rest!

Author's Response: hey! yeah, i started to re-read this fic yesterday and was like "AUGH!" because of the horrid sentence structure. so i'm pretty much re-writing the whole thing as we speak, going back and fixing things. i should have waited to ask for reviews until after i did that. :) but any way, i'm glad you still took the time to review, thank you for the compliments and the criticism!

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