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Review:the_artful_dodger says:
I have to say that this seems like it will be a very interesting story. I really love the plot idea, especially the whole Pits thing, it's a really unique spin on the Deatheater-rape-meeting things. You also seem to have really great dialogue. My only advice is to add a bit more detail so the conversations aren't as short and choppy. But I really like this story and I can't wait for an update!

Author's Response: thanks alot! I will try to add more detail, it was hard this first chapter with Albus/Maria, and Snape, and Addie all having different lives and days. Thanks for reading!

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