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Review:misshermione says:
You have truly blown me away. And that doesn't happen often, trust me. It seems that you have captured the very essence of Bellatrix, that sadistic streak that makes her who she is. You had requested a comment on the back and forth motion of this story, and I must say I liked it, I felt it added a sense of disconcertingness. (Yes, I know that's not a word, oh well)

I am truly very impressed at your characterization of Bella, it's absolutely breathtaking, she's so incredibly well- real. Your descriptions are solid, never too mcuh, and the vocabulary use is perfect. Not overly verbose, but not lacking either.

I just have two of the tinies qualms ever for you. The first being the asteriks around the "silence". It just bothers me, I don't know, it detracts from the aura of this story, the professionalism of it, persay. The second is you mixed up breath with breathe here.

"She tried to scream, to breath, but couldn’t."

You have been awarded the honor of my first 10 rating since the system came up, wonderful job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your stunning review; I'm blushing as I type! The truly evil among us are strangely fascinating and I find myself trying to figure out why they can look so much like you and me, and yet have such a dark place inside. I'm glad to see that you think I approached this exploration of Bellatrix well.

Also, thanks for the breath/breathe comment -- I shall trot of right now and fix it!

Honor, indeed, to be a 10! Thank you so much!!

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