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Review:brunettesrule says:
Good chapter. It’s a nice length (over 10 pages in Word!) – not too long but long enough so that you can have enough of what’s happening. As to characters, first of all, Narcissa and Snape? Interesting relationship, even if it’s not necessarily a pairing – I like how she’s slightly mysterious and he seems a little drawn to that. Also that Snape is very much an observer rather than a person involved in things and ”files away the information for later examination.” I’m not surprised he found the answer as to why the potion is different to everyone else’s senses first, or that he realised Slughorn’s greed at an early age. I like the bit where Snape and Lily work together – it’s a wonderfully carefully written part, and what each say is only what needs to be said – the lack of padding or details around what they say, for example. Thank you for the update, and enjoy writing!

Author's Response: Oh, length...ergh. I will not even venture into the length that this fic will end up!! :) Interesting point about Narcissa and Snape--I never so much considered them a pairing, however, after HBP, I do think they may have known each other a little better than one might expect. Nice observation about Slughorn--you're right, I do think Snape would catch one, especially if he was excluded from the Slug Club. Glad you liked the potions lesson--I had so much fun writing it. Thanks so much for keeping up with this fic and reviewing--I really like to hear your thoughts!

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