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Review:padfoot and prongs foreva says:
wow this was such a ... i dunno the only word i can think of is powerful!!! i really really liked this line:
He had never feared it and, as a teenager, she often had wondered if he welcomed it. He was the serene Marauder. He refused to be ruffled by even the biggest controversy, preferring instead to take them as they came. He would argue for his beliefs and fight those who opposed them but yet, he was the most loyal of them all. He was willing to go through any torture to protect them all and for that, Lily felt blessed to call him her friend. His willingness to sacrifice his own emotional sanctity so that James didn’t have to face this particular scene each night made Lily’s heart break. What else had he so willing endured to the sake of all of them?...

i loved the way u described him...serene!! not the word most ppl would associate with the "rebelious player" marauder, yet it somehow fits sooo perfectly, this story was wonderfully ritten and really touched the heart! u have a beautiful riting style and i cant wait to read more of ur riting!!

lyl lyl

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