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Review:daqu says:
Well, if you were planning on writing a story deticated to absolute uselessness, great job! lol. My main suggestion would be to, first, change the characters and genre. Fred and George made no appearance whatsoever, and there was absolutely no romance. Other than that, just work on having the story flow a little better. It just seemed like it darted from one subject to another on the spur of the moment. And you don't need all of those author's notes everywhere. And for the record, it's Seamus who's Irish. Dean's just plain English. Okay, now that you got your CC you wanted (sorry it took me so long!), i just wanted to tell you that there's a better sequel to Accepting Fate out. It's a real novel-length fic called Shadows of the Past. You should check it out. Keep writing! ~daqu

Author's Response: Thankyou for your tips, I will check out your stroy soon

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