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Review:Lyn Midnight says:
That made sense. The bruises and all. I am just glad that he managed to say no. It’s good that you do not see him as a complete traitor, because most people would just erase him from their stories. Even the misunderstood ones deserve to be mentioned. Again, you did great job with the character’s psychological portrait. And, of course, the ending line was good, too, as always. Now, to get a little more picky, if you allow. that should never have happened should rather be ‘that should have never happened’, and an wicked smile should be fixed to ‘a wicked smile’. So, I guess that’s the last of it. Congratulations on writing such an inspiring fiction! Good luck with the rest!

Author's Response: Arg, I really hate it when people erase Peter from their stories - I've given some nasty reviews to people just for that reason. =D The "an wicked smile" is a true mistake, though the wording of the other one is variable depending on accent or way of speaking (mine is usually strangely old-fashioned =P). I'm really glad you liked this part about Peter. It was hard to write, seeing that Peter is a character that is not looked well upon in the books or in the fandom, for that matter. I wanted to show him in a positive light and try to explain why he would have been befriended by James and Sirius, as well as why he was placed in Gryffindor. =) Thanks very much for your reviews - I really appreciated them. =)

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